Sunday, November 11, 2018

Another Picture Of You. by Dah



Eternity, the line between
sky and sea,
waves gripping the air
a fog bank tortured by light

To know that somewhere
the wind blows for you
as it does for me
I must remember this

With emotions hammered
to pulp
a need to be happy trails
a lack of discontent

The mistakes we’d made
were nothing but
shameful habits
of bitter words  

You were who you were
that first night
already
frustrated, irritated, angry

Still, we danced to Romeo Void
eyes locked
in the din of a club, singing:
I might like you better if we slept together

the blissful flavor of our kisses
only because
we couldn’t find the breath
to say No

Eternity is a strange fracture
always breaking
before one reaches the line
the mood variations, another farewell




Dah’s seventh poetry collection is Something Else’s Thoughts (Transcendent Zero Press)
and his poems have been published by editors from the US, UK, Ireland, Canada, Spain,
Singapore, Philippines, Poland, Australia, Africa, and India. He is a Pushcart Prize and
Best Of The Net nominee and the lead editor of the poetry critique group, The Lounge.


www.dahlusion.wordpress.com

2 comments:

  1. This dramatic moment of saving grace, reaching out with emotions hardly in check is sweetly sad, vulnerable and most forgiving. What we choose to hold onto can be devastating as well as what we feel the solution might be.

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  2. Thank you, Unknown, for this fine take on this poem.

    I'm honored

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